When to start a new sentence
How to improve your writing by varying your sentence starters.
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hi guys mr. B here and two dear I'm
gonna be looking at sentence stylist and
when are we looking at these because
being a teacher some Amma's when I read
people's work it's let down and starts
creating drug mean as much because to
start the sentence isn't the same we're
all the time that's normally using the
sort of their articles and indefinite
articles or even use some pronouns like
he/she they don't care we and and when
they used all the timing has a pedal and
it sort of makes the reader not care as
much about the stories was I did this I
did that he went there she what did this
they did that and the dog did this and
it just repeats all the time and it's
not the best but writing to make a
writing more creative and a drug it we
can change the different stare start
over sentences in order to to get the
reader more interested and today I want
to show you six different ways you start
sentences and if when you're writing you
use all these different very rears and
start a new sentences it should
hopefully make you writing a lot more
and eye catching and grab the reader and
keep them interested in your writing a
lot more okay now the first one that
we're going to look at if starting your
sense with a subordinating cause now if
you're not sure what a subordinate and
Clause is if you look up there you click
on there you know the my video on me and
subordinating clauses that will give you
more in-depth of what they are but
simply it said cause it doesn't make
sense on its own and it normally starts
with a subordinate conjunctions which is
because because all law if as if you
google online a subordinating
conjunctions you should see a big list
of different ones that you can started
with so as an example there are simple
sentence here I went to warm start with
home for now so we're going to change is
we're gonna add a subordinate cause at
the start to change the way this
sentence starts so now we've got because
it was called I went to do you remember
got a comma at the end of our
subordinating cause as well but that
adds more information and it means we
started telling the reader the
information straight away rather than
you see an I went home in case we can
say our sensors with is on in course and
we could use other ones so because it
was cool
I went talked and although I didn't want
to I went warm as I was finished my work
I went to lots of different ways to
start the sentence there I thought no
well next we have to start sentenced so
the next reel that we're going to look
at that you can start your sentences is
using a foot and adverbial again if
you're not sure what they are if you
have a look in that corner under my foot
adverbials video they'll tell you
exactly how they are how they use them
and what a bear for nonverbals actually
do okay it's basically in a quick going
over similar going over it's an adverb
that we put at the front of the sentence
okay so we've got a sentence here he
he'd until they were gone okay
what would do this we add a footman
adverbial so we'd not starting with
pronoun again to get ball and raise them
all again like we've said and we've got
sneakily he hit until the we've gone
who's telling us how he's hit and it
gives a bit more information about how
the action in the sentence other is
being performed user for adverbials can
really again grab the reader in give
them more information and keep them
reading let's look at it another way to
start a sentence so the third way we're
gonna look at how you can start your
sentences is starting up with a feeling
or care now we've got a sentencing they
looked everywhere for their doc what
we're gonna do is put a feeling at the
start with our comma and to break it up
from the men's their claws and then
repeat the sentence afterwards so
worried they looked everywhere for their
doc okay so it helps us connect more
with our characters let's know how
they're feeling
as well as that a lot of people think oh
well what's the difference between
adverbs and the but we really do look
for everywhere for their dog if you use
an adverb worriedly it talks about their
action so the really look at is you can
see that they're quite worried now when
we see worried they look for everywhere
for their dog they might be quite calm
they might be quite a good at looking
for they're not gonna pressure
oppression also searches use their
situation even don't care so they might
not be worriedly looking for the dog but
they are worried so it tells us how they
can't was feeling not necessarily how
they acted because we could have
something like worried he kept his calm
okay
so that means it's not how they're doing
the actions
they actually feed on that so it's quite
different and this is a really good one
to let your character your characters
really connect with your reader let's
look at the fourth way that was gonna
start over sentences now this weird that
we can start with sentences is by using
a verb that ends in ing occasional verbs
that word doing words so because I would
say yeah they did their homework all
dere or when he do is to add at the
start of the sentence a verb that ends
ING with their word comma okay so here
we've got the so key they did their
homework all dear and this could let us
know a little bit more information about
again what's happened the main clause so
we could have he went for the bus we
could have running he went for the bus
walking he went for the bus and he gives
us different information because those
two different words completely changed
the way the characters acting in that
sentence and again means we're not
starting to pour now we're starting with
a different word that will make the
reader not bored of reading the same
things over and over again now let's
look at another way we can use our
sentence starters to make a writing
better now another way that you can
start your sentences in order to vary
your writing is to use either simile or
metaphor start that okay so we've got a
simple sentence thing is she entered to
the arena now what I've done is I'm at a
simile at the start as brave as a lying
she entered the arena okay and that
really gives us more information about
the character how the feeling or type of
person they are because on the flip side
we could change out could be as timid as
a mouse she entered the arena and that
completely changes the sentences so
adding this more information keeps the
really involved pits a better picture
for the reader in their head and that's
why we use them again it's got a common
separate from the main cause of it so
everything that we've got so far that we
add at the start the sentence is
sectioned off within a comment even
don't care to separate it from the main
clause of the actual sentence now the
next way that we're gonna last with me
the last week and with that one is the
one of the only ways where we don't use
the comma with these type of sentence
starters to start so let's have a look
about and this is the last way that
we're going to look at the start your
sentence to make sure a lot of them
okay and this is simply starting your
sentence with a noun or adjective like I
said before articles and pronouns can be
used a lot of the time to start
sentences and simply use an and now
non-article start your sentence couldn't
change it or wouldn't make it a little
bit more interesting having used to air
example that we want to change you
because this one works a little bit
different but if we look here we've got
reinforce which is a now three more
filled the sky so in this example we've
got our objective magical stars stand
down on them okay now this thing might
oh well that's an obvious sentence to do
but many people might like to reimburse
from the sky or a real ball filled the
sky again it means we will start in the
same way that was done a lot of that all
the sentences and some stars stare down
with them the style stare down with them
again we're using the pronouns that we
use them for a lot of them are weaves
and articles where is it got magical
star still stared down at them
it gets the reader more involved when
you start with these nouns and you start
with these adjectives at the start that
there are times when you really really
pull in that reader in or you see
magical star stand down on them and
night light shone from the window okay
and using up with a star a lotta
sentences this really starts to build a
picture and this is really good for help
creating a scene in people's minds now
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improve your writing by varying your
differents err sentence starters if you
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